Who’s Counting?

Watching the first one,

two, three . . . four, five, six . . . seven

snowflakes fall outside.

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4 responses

  1. i like this last line of surprise that caught me so off aware. i also like the moment of this snowing that you create so well now from every first snowfall past. in fact, i sit here and experience this haiku for a long time and still enjoy it when i get up to go. … and to be clear – i like this counting haiku a lot.

  2. Pingback: Across the Haikuverse, No. 5 (Too Much Homework Edition) « Red Dragonfly

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